Goldfish, Dying! (A Minnesota Short Story, 1958) Reedited 3-2009

It is forenoon, the summer of the 1958. Myalert like owls-alarmed (her adrenaline has kicked
mother just went downstairs, she says, "I won'tinto high gear) within them I can see trouble for
be long; I got to wash a few cloths."me: her expression is sudden, intent and
I'm at the sink, cleaning out my fishbowl. Grandpaconcerned. My eyes are like marbles, the fish is in
is outside, trimming the lilac bushes; my brother isthe sink wiggling all about (perhaps having a good
someplace with his new go-cart. As I was aboutold time), but to me, I sense they might go down
to say, I'm cleaning the glass of the fish bowel ininto the drain (I tell myself this anyhow): I trip
the kitchen, that is, taking the rocks out: replacingover my tongue, my words stutter out slowly:
the water, cleaning the rocks, and I'm looking ateverything is upside down in my head, words
my goldfish (I'm eleven years old); I remaincoming out but saying only "fish...fas...fa...sh...help!"
standing at the sink in the kitchen, kind of in aI look at her and the fish: her and the fish: her
tight body position, sizing up the situation, I thinkand the fish "Calm down," she says, then looks in
I'm thinking how am I going to get this fish fromthe sink, adds that sentence:
the water it is in, to a glass in the sink, a transfer"Fish...all this over fish...? What's the matter with
process, that has to be done fast, lest I drop theyou, I thought you were dying!"
fish into the sink and heaven knows what then, IShe looks in the sink again, at me, at the fish in
think I am doing too much thinking, when thisthe sink, at me, grabs the fish, puts them into the
should really be a simple process.fish bowel, one grab, two fish, so easy, too easy
Now I got everything ready: the new water, theI say to myself, adding: now why couldn't I do
rocks are back into the bowel, and I'm about tothat?
put my goldfish back into the bowl, and I'm"Explain to me," she says, puffing from the ordeal
thinking-again thinking I have to do this fast lest Irunning up the basement stairs, and examining the
drop the fish in the sink, then what (?) I am againsituation, "what is the emergency for all this
sizing up everything, and again doing too muchscreaming (she hesitates) the fish?" she asks
calculating on this simple matter, and I learnedstaring into my marble eyes-frozen in time, with
from this episode in life, not to think too hard, lesther sudden, intent and lack of concern for my fish
you get paralyzed in the process, so again I tell(knowing there is really no emergency).
myself, 'do it!' drop the goldfish from here toShe of course knows it's the fish, and I
there in one strive, one swish of my hands will dooverreacted, but I was never one for
it, but carefully, so I pick it up, my glass with theunder-reacting, at least in those early days, I think
fish in it-the goldfish, my intentions are to dropshe knew this, and simply asked for an
the fish into the rounded top the hole in the glassexplanation, not sure why, because she knew at
bowel now-and I know I got to be quick-especiallythis point what had taken place, perhaps to calm
coordinated; I will have one chance, only oneme down.
chance, but I'm ready, or so I tell myself."I couldn't get the fish...it was, they were...go,
I notice the fish are feisty very lively todaygooo...ing to go down the drain, I thought I was
(perhaps overfed them yesterday, I tell myself;going to kill them, I mean, it was going to die in
incidentally, there are two goldfish): two quickthe drain...I got...I couldn't get it, it, it...thought it
witted fish, I think they are quicker than mewould stop breathing...!"
anyhow, and I get the notion they do not like this"Do you want me to have a heart attack?" she
small glass environment; it is perhaps likened to asays to me now, with a civil voice: no more
closet, compared to where they had come from.concern, no more anger, just a sigh of relief, and
Now I raise the glass up and as I start to poura time for cooling down.
the water into the glass, with the fish in it, into"Does not call me up those stairs again to save
the glass bowel: the fish, the glass, the bowel allanother fish, next time...just make sure there is
looking at me, the glass I took my eyes off for ano next time, ok? Pickup the bowl, and put it
second, just a second, a clap of an eyelid, and mywhere it belongs!"
eyes seemed to have went into a process of"Yes," I said, my tongue still a little tied, from the
adjusting, as a result, the glass hits the rim of thepanic; now looking at my goldfish swimming
bowel, and the fish fall head first (both) into thearound safely in my fish bowel, and my mother
sink, and I panic, I am near hyperventilating, and Iwalking down the steps to the basement to finish
rush, rush, rush to save my goldfish, fingers allher washing.
over the place, and they are squirming, sliding outIf you are asking, 'Was it worth it-' yes, I think
of my hands: they are going to die! I tell myself,so-but I'd never tell my mother that, and I'm
death is lingering over them, and dread over me,sorry I caused her to think the worse had taken
and I'm responsible: I'm in a terror, fright,placed. She was protective in her own way, and
alarm...god, what can I do...?do...do...do!perhaps came to fight a whale, and found out it
I scream: "Mom...mom...my fi...as...fa...s...help!!"was a goldfish-: if anything, she was spunky, but
My mother comes running up the stairs, thinkingthat is part of being a parent and I was a kid,
there is a tornado, or earthquake about to takelearning, and she was teaching, that's how it
place, or perhaps I fell into the fish bowl. Her faceworks on this planet.
is not calm, and sullen, her eyes are brooding and